And, as Jeffro noted, there are elements of the film Taken in there. Believe it or not, the Taken thread was the first thing I thought of when I sat down to write it. The premise was the easy part: kidnap someone. Kidnapping comes with an automatic clock, and if there’s one thing I learned growing up with Jack Bauer, is that a ticking clock makes everything better.
I guess I could have killed someone’s puppy. But anyway…
One of the first characters I had created in my writing career was Sean Patrick Ryan, space ranger, for lack of a better term. There’s a lot of background to the Rangers I made. But they operated very much like Texas Rangers: their jurisdiction is wherever they are. If you don’t like it, you may not survive.
Since I’ve got whole volumes about Ranger Ryan on my computer (which I’ll get around to releasing one day, when I’m happy with them), I knew he lived long enough to have kids. So let’s kidnap one of them.
Okay, that’s a good start, but this is Pulp, right? Some dirty little slavers aren’t going to be that much of a problem. Not big enough of a threat. How about an Empire? Can I get Ming the Merciless on speed dial? … Eh. Ming was okay, but let’s go bigger. How about a twelve-foot tall, four armed gorilla? Yeah. That’s more like it. How about a solution. Hm? Single combat? Let’s steal some low gravity tactics from John Carter … It’s not bad.
Another part of Jeffro’s initial review was that there was a second level to the threat. Just when you thought it was over, something else happens. It’s not as bad as the five hundred villains at the end of a JPRG, but it escalates the threat. That was originally the end of the story. No second level threat. Nothing.
I read it again. Nah. This was too easy. I need to beat this guy up some more. A lot more.
That’s where the dragon comes in. Mostly because I really like dragons. Who doesn’t?
But no spoilers.
To end where we began, about the historical anecdote slipping into the story, that was an ad lib. Mostly because I don’t outline books, or short stories. The last time I tried outlining a novel, I found it easier to just start writing the novel. Usually, I have scenes or images already in my head before I begin. But it was an anecdote I’ve always liked, and it just fit.